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Birds

Trees green canopy blocks the sun A place where variety of birds have fun Crows, magpies search on the ground While the falcons screech does resound Robins, swallows, wrens fly in mad chase Round corners into the trees with haste Some will sit on top of the fence line Singing and chirping in the sunshine 10/20/12

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Date: 1/18/2013 8:45:00 AM
nicely done Phyllis,,, thank you for reading my Touch of Skin" carry on with the write ;} Hmmm " it's a thought , I will go through old one's I wrote 10 - 12 years ago,, see what I could find. have a great day Xoxo's Phyllis
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Date: 11/3/2012 2:24:00 PM
Very expressive work..Enjoyed seeing those birds through your eyes...Sara
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Date: 10/28/2012 6:17:00 PM
Lovely poem,
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Date: 10/27/2012 5:51:00 PM
thanks for all the comments today, Phyllis. So I suppose you are seeing that white stuff too lately?? Grrrrrr
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Date: 10/27/2012 5:51:00 PM
Phyllis, I love, love, love this! A beautiful crescendo of verse until you end it magically in song.
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Date: 10/27/2012 2:16:00 PM
Thank you for visiting my poetry today Phyllis. My last poem: Last line was not so good, have recovered slightly at the end. Have a lovely weekend - oxox love Anne-Lise :) (PS.take a look at my blog.)
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Date: 10/24/2012 1:22:00 PM
Just love the 3rd couplet, hope you are fine and not wearing yourself out being Gram Light & Love
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Date: 10/23/2012 2:32:00 PM
A poem about birdsalways gets me off my perch Phyl. Aren't we lucky to have somany different kinds that all have a different point of view! Nice assortment you have here!
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Date: 10/23/2012 2:12:00 AM
It's a beautiful poem, Phyllis. I really enjoyed visualizing all those birds right in front of me.
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Date: 10/23/2012 2:03:00 AM
the world would be a very sad place without them, Phyllis, lovely poem enjoyed...
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Date: 10/21/2012 11:57:00 AM
So fun to watch...but they do get noisey at times !! And then there is always the little "splats" left behind lol
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Date: 10/21/2012 11:29:00 AM
I just adore birds. I had fun writing about the ones I saw a long time ago adorning the house of my in-laws. Best part of that trip around my monster in law. haha. this is great, Phyllis.
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Date: 10/20/2012 1:03:00 PM
Phyllis, i like the image, wish I was a bird sometimes... well not really, I'd rather enjoy the scenery. Nice rhymes by the way...xox~pd
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Date: 10/20/2012 11:31:00 AM
It sounds so beautiful ..... and you have described it wonderfully Phyllis. Have a nice weekend. - oxox love from Anne-Lise :)
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