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Bffs - Never - Fallen

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Best friends forever two bracelets, each with half a heart friendship ended when the tart stole my boyfriend Tossed ~ one bracelet. Tossed ~ two friends who lost my respect. (For cousin Susan, who thought she had to steal everyone's boyfriend) 28 Words November 30th 2015 Lin Lane Fallen in 25-30 words contest Host: nette onclaud

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Paul Callus
Date: 12/5/2015 3:02:00 PM
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They certainly lost your respect, and friendship! Maybe a blessing in disguise! Congrats on this fine win, Lin. ~ Regards // paul
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/5/2015 3:10:00 PM
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Thank you very much, Paul. Definitely was a blessing.
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 12/4/2015 9:43:00 PM
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Wonderful verse n win Lin.. big congrats!
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/4/2015 11:20:00 PM
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Thanks a lot, Upma.
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Skat A
Date: 12/4/2015 8:14:00 PM
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Lin, sweet win--- SKAT
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/4/2015 11:20:00 PM
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Thanks, skat.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/4/2015 7:14:00 PM
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so glad this one made the list. BIG congrats to you.
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/4/2015 7:16:00 PM
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Thank you for coming back, Andrea..you're so kind.
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Rob Carmack
Date: 12/4/2015 7:02:00 PM
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In the long run, they did you a favor. Congrats on your win.
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/4/2015 7:12:00 PM
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Thank you, Rob. They certainly did.
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 12/4/2015 4:52:00 PM
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greeat piece, lin... good they are out of your life..sweet, fine congrats and thanks for joining my contest..huggs
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/4/2015 6:35:00 PM
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Thank you, nette. Good idea for a contest...thanks for hosting.
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Jan Allison
Date: 12/4/2015 4:31:00 PM
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good riddance to both of them Lin - congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/4/2015 4:37:00 PM
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thanks Jan
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/29/2015 6:01:00 PM
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This is great. Not what happened, but the clever way you did it, Lin. I likes it!!
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/29/2015 6:04:00 PM
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Thanks, Andrea. Nice to see you..;)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 11/29/2015 12:13:00 PM
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This poem was cute, believable and just human enough to be easily relatable. Emile.
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/29/2015 1:22:00 PM
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Thanks, I'm sure it's happened to lots of people...but not to me. lol sounds like a teenage problem.

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