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Beyond Midnight

He lay awake and hoped to die,
Hot tears were rolling down his cheeks:
The Cancer took his wife that night
(Although she’d bravely fought for weeks).

The clock was striking half past twelve;
A sudden light appeared and shone;
His wife was smiling, touched his hand,
She whispered love - and then was gone…

For Andrea’s One in Three, Write Beautifully contest

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  1. Date: 8/9/2013 7:43:00 PM
    a super cool win.........SKAT

  1. Date: 8/9/2013 10:45:00 AM
    Ahhh!! Great emotive and expressive winning work..Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 8/9/2013 6:31:00 AM
    So sad Jack. Congrats on the win.

  1. Date: 8/9/2013 1:04:00 AM
    Jack, I had no idea you wrote this one!! It is not your usual style but it's impressive. Very moving. Congrats for your second place.

  1. Date: 8/8/2013 9:48:00 PM
    Jack, it is lovely... congrats...Linda

  1. Date: 8/3/2013 7:42:00 PM
    I love this, Jack!! Simply sweet and beautiful...a perfect entry for Andrea's Contest! Always, Annalise

  1. Date: 7/31/2013 5:37:00 PM
    Oh this one is so nice that it made me want to weep. I am such a romantic and when it comes to being parted it touches my heart. love phyl

  1. Date: 7/28/2013 5:28:00 PM
    Jack thank you for sharing this lovely and heartfelt poem. So sorry for your loss. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 7/28/2013 11:13:00 AM
    uplifting piece despite the passing on of a loved one... midnight makes this piece a most heavenly one, jack..:) huggs

  1. Date: 7/28/2013 8:26:00 AM
    Wonderful! I've heard of this happening. Love, daver

  1. Date: 7/27/2013 10:36:00 PM
    I like the word of description by a couple of the previous poets comments..."haunting", though this is placed under a good light, a haunting of a lover who came to say farewell to her husband who grieves completely for her! This should help him a little to deal with his loss! I really loved reading this fantastic poem here this evening my friend! What a tremendous piece, Quite the wonderful poem, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 7/27/2013 9:08:00 PM
    Hauntingly beautiful poem, Jack...well done as always. Best wishes for the contest with this winning piece of work! x Annalise

  1. Date: 7/27/2013 6:47:00 PM
    Jack, there is nothing I can say except "You have touched the hearts of all who read this poignant entry... Jake

  1. Date: 7/27/2013 6:19:00 PM
    hi Jack haunting and beautiful Shadow x smiles (7)

  1. Date: 7/27/2013 4:38:00 PM
    Ahhh!! Enjoyed the love and sentiment in this one..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for stopping by..Sara