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Sol's reborn of virgin flame that's unbelievably bright. And pierces sleepy eyelids as kaleidoscopes of light. Somewhere twixt dream and awake reality jumps off track. And there, Sol paints an abstract on a field of darkest black. Sleep slips into fantasy on witnessing Sol's rebirth. And as time's held motionless, He gilds the rim of the Earth. As night retreats, Sol rises, and the day starts to unwind. But I'm forced to look away; or His light may strike me blind.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/16/2018 4:13:00 PM
Love these lines "And pierces sleepy eyelids as kaleidoscopes of light"
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Date: 3/17/2018 9:33:00 AM
Thanks so much Line, I truly appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/21/2015 9:26:00 AM
SUPERB POETRY MY FRIEND! Smooooooooth flow, excellent message and strong closing!A7
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Date: 12/21/2015 3:35:00 PM
Thanks Robert, your visits mean a lot to me. Emile.
Date: 12/19/2015 6:49:00 PM
how fluid and vivid, emile.. one of your best!..huggs and happy holydays!..huggs
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Emile Pinet
Date: 12/20/2015 12:49:00 PM
Thanks Nette, you've brought a smile to my day. Emile.

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