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"Betrayed By Your Best Friend"

u gave them all trust, they walked you home, they created a tie withing your feelings and
senses, they adviced you, you were thinking they wanted a better life like you do, for
then, they walked out and talk about you like a pig and rat of the street, like you are
the motive of themself's, you are on the other hand feeding everyone with pride the kind
and gentle friend you have, thinking your secrets and heart is safe, knowing is risky you
dodge you instinc's of defense and kept on with you friendship, uncondicional, for when
you give all you can they judge who and what you are, not helping a bit, your thinking
they are right, they take over you like water to deep hole, when the point of enough comes
is too late, they have taken over all that you are, blind folding you and dumping you to
hell for no idea who or what hit or stab your back, all you feel when you open your eyes
is a thin needle piercing your chest side by side, is cold when your lonely right? When is
all lost? I could feel same, it doesn't end, is all inside your head, you feel is gone and
wont turn back, now your done for a friendship and never take the real one when it comes
after that one, always like a mental fiction or test, then when a real person who connects
with your tought's and pain you let them fall or not even care of them, knowing inside it
could be real but it seems same as last time betrayed by your friend, they come and go but
one or two stay still, they don't leave, your right or wrong in good or bad they stand
still, when your tears are falling wet their shoulder's are drying them, advicing your
actions and later concepts, knowing how it feels and been able to know beyond the limits,
still you refuse to them, you can see clear but your past experience erase the clear
reality of what a real friend is, good and bad standing still, but now is gone, cold and
lonely and left in ruin, best friend, so long since we last met, your hate comes back in
one minute, your words are dead, what you can do if thats what came in you the moment they
decided to walk away, leaving inside an empty veil, now that your chance is here for a new
start, don't let it waste, don't let it die here, pick it up the floor and hang it with
pride for you to know what life is really meant to become tomorrow, a little advice for
the betrayer, the moment you see those you betrayed walking like king's, there will be no
space for such a filth like you, tribute for those betrayed.

Copyright © Derek Ortiz

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  1. Date: 8/8/2010 2:00:00 PM
    love yur work so much