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"betrayed By Your Best Friend"

u gave them all trust, they walked you home, they created a tie withing your feelings and senses, they adviced you, you were thinking they wanted a better life like you do, for then, they walked out and talk about you like a pig and rat of the street, like you are the motive of themself's, you are on the other hand feeding everyone with pride the kind and gentle friend you have, thinking your secrets and heart is safe, knowing is risky you dodge you instinc's of defense and kept on with you friendship, uncondicional, for when you give all you can they judge who and what you are, not helping a bit, your thinking they are right, they take over you like water to deep hole, when the point of enough comes is too late, they have taken over all that you are, blind folding you and dumping you to hell for no idea who or what hit or stab your back, all you feel when you open your eyes is a thin needle piercing your chest side by side, is cold when your lonely right? When is all lost? I could feel same, it doesn't end, is all inside your head, you feel is gone and wont turn back, now your done for a friendship and never take the real one when it comes after that one, always like a mental fiction or test, then when a real person who connects with your tought's and pain you let them fall or not even care of them, knowing inside it could be real but it seems same as last time betrayed by your friend, they come and go but one or two stay still, they don't leave, your right or wrong in good or bad they stand still, when your tears are falling wet their shoulder's are drying them, advicing your actions and later concepts, knowing how it feels and been able to know beyond the limits, still you refuse to them, you can see clear but your past experience erase the clear reality of what a real friend is, good and bad standing still, but now is gone, cold and lonely and left in ruin, best friend, so long since we last met, your hate comes back in one minute, your words are dead, what you can do if thats what came in you the moment they decided to walk away, leaving inside an empty veil, now that your chance is here for a new start, don't let it waste, don't let it die here, pick it up the floor and hang it with pride for you to know what life is really meant to become tomorrow, a little advice for the betrayer, the moment you see those you betrayed walking like king's, there will be no space for such a filth like you, tribute for those betrayed.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/8/2010 2:00:00 PM
love yur work so much
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