Bemasked

Bemasked Behind a happy mask Beneath your guise of joy Belie sweet wounded eyes Betrothed to dreams unlived Belayed for these few hours Because you smile tonight 27 Apr 2014 - Dave Mohn Let's Pleiades Contest

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/6/2014 11:40:00 AM

Hi David, wow... to let it all go... A smile, can bemask it all... enjoyed your winning poem... Linda

David Mohn
Date: 5/6/2014 1:17:00 PM

Thanks Linda...always a pleasure when you stop by :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/3/2014 12:14:00 AM

wow this is so lovely. Glad to see it first on the list. congratulations

David Mohn
Date: 5/3/2014 8:04:00 AM

Thanks so much Andrea :)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 5/1/2014 8:38:00 PM

truly lovely. Congrad's Light & Love

David Mohn
Date: 5/1/2014 10:01:00 PM

Thanks Debbie...appreciate you stopping by and leaving the nice comment

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 5/1/2014 6:27:00 AM

it's trully great write. :D COngratz on the great win.. :D, olive eloisa :)

David Mohn
Date: 5/1/2014 12:37:00 PM

Thank you so much Olive for the kind comments :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 5/1/2014 5:50:00 AM

Wonderful write on the theme, congrats on great win David !

David Mohn
Date: 5/1/2014 12:35:00 PM

Thank you very much Dr. Upma...much appreciated

Paul Callus

Date: 5/1/2014 5:17:00 AM

Congrats David; this is a really merited win! // paul

David Mohn
Date: 5/1/2014 12:33:00 PM

Thanks Paul...you always have a kind word :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/1/2014 4:45:00 AM

love the progress of your vivid thoughts where happy is really sad.. best cheers on your win in my contest.. huggs

David Mohn
Date: 5/1/2014 12:30:00 PM

Thanks Nette for your thoughtful comments and the placement in your contest...really means a lot