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tears falling on stone my hair a cloak of sadness - all the beloved Senryu November 24, 2012

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  1. Date: 12/3/2012 9:24:00 AM
    memories of sorrow .. another thing we share .. elegant words profoundly penned luv .. even in sadness .. they shine bright ..

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 8:25:00 AM
    a day in the cemetery. No better way to convey the feelings in a senryu than this.

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 7:08:00 AM
    beautiful senyru, my friend. I hope you are having a great day : )

  1. Date: 11/24/2012 10:32:00 PM
    What a striking and amazing write my friend! Awesome portrayal of sadness with this poem! Very nicely done Constance, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 11/24/2012 4:39:00 PM
    beautiful poem constance.

  1. Date: 11/24/2012 4:01:00 PM
    You write with your heart Constance, just gorgeous. - Have a lovely weekend. -oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/24/2012 3:55:00 PM
    I havn't tryed one of these, it is beautiful. Is the stone his heart???