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Before You

Before you Before you there was nothing... No life... No light... Just shadows of an existence vanishing in the distance. Then you appeared and I was caught up in the eye of your hurricane. My dimmed starlight was consumed by you and then it exploded into a supernova Then a sudden calm set in...and the universe took notice. The eyes that were once blurred, are now clearly in focus, and you are their soul possessor. Peace and harmony now eclipse each other as their orbits unite as one. Now... after you my existence is satisfied, as the atmosphere is rarefied because of you... John Derek Hamilton May 16,2016

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Date: 4/4/2020 1:40:00 PM
Enjoyed this very much John.
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John Hamilton
Date: 4/4/2020 7:13:00 PM
Wow thanks for your comment on this oldie!

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