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Bedroom Rhapsody, Collaboration By Mel Merrill and Casarah Nance

My angel wakes to dew drops through her misty, bedroom eyes, Of what she dreams, the stars it seems, as begins the dawn's reprise. Her ruby lips ignite a spark, and beg a gentle kiss, This thing I crave, to love a slave, and until her waking miss. Passion welling deep inside as she holds me tenderly, As the cockcrow grants an added verse to our bedroom melody. Sweet heat her touch upon my face, weathered by life's earnest way, Made young again by love's refrain, as the lilting notes replay. Ah to wake, perchance to sing, though now and then off key... Still we harmonize to dawn's reprise--our bedroom rhapsody! A collaboration between Mel Merrill and Casarah Nance 6-17-14

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/21/2014 12:07:00 AM

I'm glad it's not hello Kitty, LOL, my sisters a hello kitty freak. Disney's all right.. LOL.... I can not imagine you enjoying the theme and dream... :) U R Awesome...Linda

Mel Merrill
Date: 6/21/2014 3:22:00 AM

For reals. Disney and I go way back. I know all the behind the scenes stuff, and used to get in the park for free with my WED I.D. I was kinda like a tour guide/celebrity...lol I know everything about Walt there is to know, almost, and handled all of the data entry for EPCOT Center, while it was being constructed. It was totally awesome!! Au revoir...Mel :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/19/2014 3:04:00 PM

LOL, I'm coming back to all my notifications, it's nice to see you replying to all comments... Linda

Mel Merrill
Date: 6/19/2014 10:54:00 PM

Of course. You should see my new Facebook cover--it's awesome...if you like Disney stuff. I'm a Disney freak, and not just cuz I worked for the company. Been one since I was a kid. Went to Disneyland every summer, and it wasn't like now. I wish you could have seen it then.

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 6/18/2014 8:52:00 PM

Beautifully written you two, sensuous and sweet...loved it!

Mel Merrill
Date: 6/18/2014 11:23:00 PM

Thank you, Cecilia. Nice of you to drop by and read this. It was a fun write and I'm pleased you liked it. Hope all is well with you...xxx...Mel :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/18/2014 4:34:00 PM

Oh me! Oh my! So sweet, and cute.... awesome Rhaspsody, collaboration.... Linda

Mel Merrill
Date: 6/18/2014 5:47:00 PM

Thank you, my sweet. It was something to do, and I had fun doing it. Win, win! Thanx for the visit and read, Linda. Stay kool :)

Casarah Nance

Date: 6/18/2014 6:55:00 AM

:) Good Morning! This turned out great, practice makes perfect, thanks for a sweet, (sexy) dance. Can't wait to see what encore we can come up with :)

Mel Merrill
Date: 6/18/2014 2:28:00 PM

An encore? You women are all the same. Once is never enough :)

Tim Smith

Date: 6/18/2014 5:35:00 AM

Wonderful Mel and Cas...a beautiful morning.... Hugs Tim

Tim Smith
Date: 6/18/2014 2:32:00 PM

Lol

Mel Merrill
Date: 6/18/2014 2:30:00 PM

Morning must look different where you are :) Hey, Tim, thanks for the visit and read. I did this for Cas, not for me; glad you liked it, though. mel :)

Jan Allison

Date: 6/18/2014 1:46:00 AM

Oh Casarah and Mel this is a joy - imagery sublime and soooo romantic. Hugs as ever to you both Jan xxxx

Mel Merrill
Date: 6/18/2014 1:56:00 AM

Hi Jan, and thank you. This is about as close to a free-verse as I get...lol Hopefully, this will appeal to the romantics, but it's a little erotic as well--but that's Casarah's fault. I just wanted a clean, wholesome family-oriented write, but no! lol Thanks for the visit and read, Jan...Mel...:)