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I went to my cousin's wedding, she married an Italian. The wedding was in a huge church with a thousand stairs, or so it seemed. Anyways, while in the church, it rained, it was not just rain but a torrential downpour . . . Okay, so try to get down a thousand steps without tripping, wearing high heels in the rain . . . She had wanted an outdoor wedding. "No problem," said Dad. Canopy tents covered the backyard of a nice catered affair. The garage was the bar, tables set so elegant. It was nice, except for the storm, that refused to go away, in fact got worse. I will never forget the bride and groom at the head table, trying to smile while holding an umbrella . . . But, guess what, I don't think it mattered because, they were in love . . .
______________________ August 29, 2012 Poetry/Narrative/In Love Copyright Protected, ID 08- 417-049-29 All Rights Reserved, 2012, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, My Cousin's Wedding Sponsored by Joann Grisette, Judged 09/30/2012 Third Place _______________________ Featured poem week of September 9, 2014

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Date: 10/3/2012 12:53:00 AM
my best friends wedding the same thing happened, and she beamed through the rain for the photos anyway, many congrats on your win Constance
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Date: 10/2/2012 2:33:00 PM
Constance, Congratulations with your fantastic entry for Joann's "My Cousin's Wedding" cheers~ xox~ PD
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Date: 10/1/2012 7:33:00 AM
What a super win for you. Congratulations Constance. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/30/2012 11:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Constance , nice one xx
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Date: 8/30/2012 2:52:00 PM
Awww, what a lovely write - a winner for sure here - and congrats on all your wins, of course : )
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Date: 8/29/2012 6:41:00 PM
same thing happened at my best friends wedding, but her radiant smile was more noticable than the downpour, best of luck in the contest with this charming piece Constance
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Date: 8/29/2012 2:17:00 PM
This is a perfect example of a stupendous narrative write my friend! I really enjoyed the way you have written this poem, it read like a story, but in a poetic sense! Quite the wondrous piece Constance, Great Work!!
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