Beautiful Night - the Tanka Style

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~Beautiful Night~ (Double Tanka) Beautiful evening The moon rises in the night sky The clouds start to hide I start to see bright stars too Relax, another day is done Beauty every day Beautiful night displays moon Magical brushwork The Creator do it all God paints fall beautifully. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2012 October.12.2016

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Lewis Nyaga

Date: 10/17/2016 5:07:00 AM

A beautiful poem Dorian, i enjoyed..//Almighty blessings

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 10/20/2016 11:19:00 AM

Thank you ever so kindly Lewis, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Deeply appreciated:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light God bless you!:)D

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 10/12/2016 6:18:00 PM

I love your poem you did a good job on this poem. I read it twice. Well done.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 10/15/2016 10:08:00 AM

Thank you ever so kindly Darlene, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Deeply appreciated:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light God bless you!:)D