Be Gone!

Be gone! Out of my thoughts You who caused me distraught I won't let my heart break by your Arrows. Be gone! Won't let my soul Fall upon these stones and With the plight of volatile storms Turn cold. Be gone! Out of my head Raging thoughts that cause dread Let me fly with the swallows and Change course. By CarolineCécile Copyright © 08.13.10

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David Byrne

Date: 8/20/2010 4:39:00 PM

here here!

Dakarai Cobb

Date: 8/14/2010 12:00:00 PM

very powerful piece about taking control of the things that affect you. decide to let them hurt you or decide to let them go. great write.

Tim Ryerson

Date: 8/13/2010 9:31:00 PM

Ah, yes Caroline...'Be gone! Change course'...A beautifully written poem which many can identify with (including me!)...and as always, thanks for your very kind comments and support - Tim

Jay Del Fierro

Date: 8/13/2010 9:17:00 PM

no doubt,BE GONE,to the thoughts which will try to crush your souls meaning...then the swallow can fly like an eagle...enjoyed this,thanks for sharing,and your wonderful comments........peace , jay

Skat A

Date: 8/13/2010 9:09:00 PM

bE gOnE GeT gOiNg lOl, enJoYEd *LUV- S.K.A.T.