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Balance of Harmony

There's a balance of harmony inside our tranquility, a euphony aligned with affection and romance, substantial depth of contentment and stability, for you, my love, have given me a second chance. A euphony aligned with affection and romance, your tenacious devotion, my stubborn ways, for you, my love, have given me a second chance, thank you for taking to heart every word I say. Your tenacious devotion, my stubborn ways, although I'm not surprised by your loyalty, thank you for taking to heart every word I say, no matter what you still treat me like royalty. Although I'm not surprised by your loyalty, your unwavering ardent nature always prevails, no matter what you still treat me like royalty, I shall always express my sincerity in complete detail. Your unwavering ardent nature always prevails, substantial depth of contentment and stability, I shall always express my sincerity in complete detail, there's a balance of harmony inside our tranquility. New or Old 2 - Poetry Contest Sponsor: Eve Roper ~Date Written: March 20, 2016~

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Date: 7/31/2016 11:56:00 AM
- Balance of harmony a lovely choice of your poems, congratulations Laura :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/30/2016 7:46:00 PM
Luloo, back to congratulate you on another great win for your lovely Pantoum poem. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 7/30/2016 4:55:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Laura. Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/30/2016 3:08:00 PM
Nice pantoum tribute to your beloved -- and, I learned a new word, euphony! Placement congrats! :-)
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Date: 7/30/2016 1:19:00 PM
Congrats Laura to win on your wonderful poem. Hugs
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Date: 4/7/2016 10:10:00 AM
Hi Luloo, Congratulations on your win in the contest. What a wonderful flow to your Pantoum, soft and gentle are the words, each line to be savoured. This has to be a seven and into my faves. An excellent write....Mike.
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Date: 4/5/2016 5:21:00 PM
You are blessed with this 'balance of harmony' Laura. Beautifully written, and congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/5/2016 9:55:00 PM
you are so sweet Sandra, seriously no one compares..thank you have a great night! :)-luloo
Date: 4/5/2016 4:23:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 4/5/2016 9:54:00 PM
thank you Sara :)-luloo
Date: 4/5/2016 10:28:00 AM
Wow, a Pantoum brimming with happiness of balance in harmony...Congratulations...
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Date: 4/5/2016 12:40:00 PM
Thank you Probir: )-luloo
Date: 4/5/2016 4:56:00 AM
Great work Laura loo.. no wonder top podium.. big congrats!
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Lu Loo
Date: 4/5/2016 12:39:00 PM
Thank your Dr. Upma:)-luloo
Date: 4/4/2016 10:24:00 PM
Congrats on a great win Luloo
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Date: 4/5/2016 12:38:00 PM
Thank you Joseph: )-luloo
Date: 4/4/2016 8:31:00 PM
Lovely win Luloo, congratulations ...
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Date: 4/5/2016 12:37:00 PM
Thank you Charlie: )-luloo
Date: 4/4/2016 4:48:00 PM
such a beautiful flow to your pantoum LuLoo many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Lu Loo
Date: 4/4/2016 5:10:00 PM
thank you Jan :)-luloo
Date: 3/20/2016 11:18:00 PM
Each line is perfection ... and you express such beautiful emotions. I love pantoum, but I've never been good at keeping consistent rhymes with them, but you've excelled at it. Well done!
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Date: 3/21/2016 9:57:00 AM
Thank you Tim very much :)-luloo
Date: 3/20/2016 1:28:00 PM
this is really an astounding, charming read flowing like a river's affection, lou... delighted!..huggs
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Date: 3/20/2016 2:07:00 PM
Thank you Nette...:)-luloo
Date: 3/20/2016 12:28:00 PM
Laura, BEAUTIFUL, your pantoum flows so well I hardly noticed the repeated lines, this is wonderful, and I am loving it 7 !
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Date: 3/20/2016 2:06:00 PM
Thank you sweet lady...you are very sweet :)-luloo

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