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Backwards Proposal

Working extra hard a lot
For the plans that I have got
In a special time and place
A surprise look on his face
Soft blindfold on eyes of gold
What a sight he will behold
I will lead him through a door
That will shock him to the core
Of his soul, heart, even mind
Opening his eyes to find
I am down on bended knees
Asking him to marry me
My hand starts to shake and shiver
Holding a ring made of silver
My heart pounding scared to death
Hoping his answer is yes
He lifts me up and softly whispers
"Yes" and gives me gentle kisses
Hugging me so strong and tight
In his arms all through the night

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  1. Date: 9/30/2014 12:46:00 PM
    Ah this is so beautiful. Congratulations on your win Robin.

  1. Date: 9/28/2014 6:59:00 AM
    - Robin, congrats with your winning poem - A wonderful 1st place !!! - Enjoy reading it - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 9/28/2014 5:35:00 AM
    Enjoyed the romantic write, congrats on the win. robin

  1. Date: 9/27/2014 11:08:00 AM
    Thank you for entering my contest!

  1. Date: 9/27/2014 8:23:00 AM
    lovely romantic write Robin many congrats on your top spot:-) hugs Jan xx

  1. Date: 1/28/2014 10:32:00 AM
    Ahh!! Great quality poetry!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 1/27/2014 8:46:00 PM
    this is so cool. ARe you two married? I noticed your avatar is from Glee. Is it symbol of you?(I can't tell from your name!) BIG congrats on a great win! and if this is a true story, I hope you got married!!

  1. Date: 1/27/2014 8:59:00 AM
    Enjoyed the poem for In the faraway contest and congrats on the win, robin

  1. Date: 1/27/2014 7:56:00 AM
    Congrats Robin, on a wonderful win. You just keep producing the good ones.....Hugs.....Roger

  1. Date: 10/12/2013 10:06:00 AM
    Very sweet; l really enjoyed this. Well done, hon :)

  1. Date: 10/11/2013 11:13:00 PM
    Nice romantic write, Robin