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Back Yard Tanka Moment

the Ozark plateau sun frames mount’s splendid beauty sun sets in Ozarks pear trees glisten burnt orange a sweet, juicy pear drops, thud! Francine Robert Contest Contest: The view 9/9/11 John Moses Freeman

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Date: 9/14/2011 7:39:00 AM
Pears do that this time of year don't they, I've yet to actually hear one land though :) Nice poem, enjoyed.
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Date: 9/11/2011 2:43:00 PM
my favorite lines..."pear trees glisten burnt orange a sweet, juicy pear drops, thud!" will put you in the winner's circle John. CR
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Date: 9/9/2011 2:59:00 PM
Sounds like beautiful view from your back yard. God Bless phyl
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Date: 9/9/2011 12:00:00 PM
A Fine piece Moses, I enjoyed the read, quite visual...Good luck in the contest...God Bless...Taz
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