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Bacchus

Bacchus
God of wine twice born
Bacchus son of thunderbolt...
two fermentations

God of wine twice born
Bacchus son of thunderbolt...
from grape to happy

God of wine twice born
Bacchus son of thunderbolt...
happy to headache.

©1/05/2013
contest entry

winehaiku

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/20/2013 2:53:00 PM

crap, this hilarious one did not place? It was the funnest one I saw!

Kathryn Collins

Date: 5/19/2013 7:22:00 AM

Bacchus twice born. Like the quality of mercy twice blessed. High to low. love it. Kathy

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/18/2013 6:22:00 AM

Who minds a little headache if his reward is happiness given to him by the son of Zeus? Long time...

Painted Hunter

Date: 5/17/2013 2:01:00 PM

Ha...headaches...I'm glad you are feeling better, Mandy!

Harry Horsman

Date: 5/13/2013 8:23:00 AM

you tell the whole story here, Girl,, like these good luck in contest,

Judy Konos

Date: 5/11/2013 7:28:00 AM

LOL is right....ADORABLE...

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 5/8/2013 4:34:00 AM

lol. No good in dem grapes. Lovely entry, Mandy. The very best of luck to you in the contest, my friend. :)

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 5/6/2013 1:24:00 PM

Mandy, Hi my name is Phil, I went to school with Chef.He asked me to write this. He is in the hospital having stomach surgery. He said to tell YOU he is still in remission and this is a doctor error from two months ago. today is the 4th day with temps in the 70's. there is still snow deep in the woods. Chef says he will be back on POETRYSOUP by the weekend. Don't tell him I said this but I don't think so. Maybe in a week to ten days. Have a great day respectfully Phillip Rollings

Jack Horne

Date: 5/5/2013 3:32:00 PM

love these, Mandy - congrats on your wins x

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/5/2013 1:18:00 PM

Way to go! This is really good.

Ndaba Sibanda

Date: 5/4/2013 2:58:00 PM

Beautiful write. It is right to write...

Ndaba Sibanda

Date: 5/4/2013 2:57:00 PM

Beautiful write. It is right to write...

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 5/3/2013 6:43:00 PM

A deep write! [each one is 3 parts ;)] Thanks so much for stopping by my verses. Light & Love

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/3/2013 11:34:00 AM

wonderful petix imprints.. i like the repetitive lines... :) huggs, mandy

Bl Devnath

Date: 5/3/2013 4:37:00 AM

Excellent presentation. Thanks.....,loved always, bl

Matthew Anish

Date: 5/2/2013 9:47:00 PM

Your words are intoxicating as wine! Peace & love Matthew Anis

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/2/2013 10:12:00 AM

haha. I loved that last part, from happy to headache!!!

Len Gasun

Date: 5/2/2013 3:23:00 AM

A great poem and I'm so delighted to read it my dear friend Mandy! A winner for me. Thank you so much for sharing & your warm congratulatory comments on my poem. Good luck and best wishes always! love and big sweetest hugs, Leonora