Baby - Love Is At the Door

Baby, it’s you I adore With you… I want to explore With you… I want so much more My heart is knocking at your door Night after night My emotions you ignite My chest is tight No longer can I fight You feel so right With you… I reach new heights Tonight’s the night My destinations in sight My heart… the guiding light My love… I will recite When we unite… Tonight… Lay

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Audrey Haick

Date: 12/15/2010 12:07:00 PM

I love it, Lay! Excellent rhyme and flow creating a wonderful poem! My very best wishes for Christmas and a Happy New Year filled with all the good things you wish for yourself and the kids! Much love, Audrey

Walayee Poet Lay Whitlock-Ishway

Date: 12/15/2010 10:28:00 AM

Thank you all... I loved writing it! Lay

Suresh Iyer

Date: 12/15/2010 9:01:00 AM

Loved your poem Thanks for your generous support during the year 2010 Looking forward to 2011 My Best Wishes to you Suresh Iyer, India

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/15/2010 6:29:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your heart with us through your poetry here at PoetrySoup Lay. My time for reading and commenting will be short until after the New Year. So, today I send a wish from my house to yours. Have a Joyous Holiday and a Happy New Year. Please remember the sick and hungry in your prayers daily. Do all you can to help in anyway you can. Love and blessing, Carol and Family (Your smile can warm a heart)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/14/2010 10:30:00 PM

Sweet sweet love poem, Walayee! LUv, Andrea

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 12/14/2010 2:59:00 PM

Ahhhhh now this is romantic poetry at its best... Bravo....my friend

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/14/2010 2:52:00 PM

Lovely feelings of love you have penned so well with nice rhyming, Walayee