Get Your Premium Membership

Awakening

Walking along the old, crumbled stone that shatters beneath my feet I pause to gaze at the hummingbird that has stopped to flutter above the rainbowed wildflowers That the morning dew has glistened on, Giving them just enough of a drink to refresh them Before the blazing sun shines down to wither their petaled bodies Small animals hurriedly scurry out of my sight A nature-made wooden bench Smoothed from weather-ware catches my heavy eyes I stop to rest my aching feet Still gazing at the peacefulness that surrounds me I am lost to this world As if it were only a dream I awaken to nightfall My eyes adjusting to my surroundings A small amount of fear wells up into my throat I run, deeper into the woods Each step that I take upon the beaten, narrowed path Snaps twigs beneath my feet Trying to grip my legs Almost tripping me As the moon smiles down With its full, fat face I look at all the beauty And I feel...so out of place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 9/29/2009 12:23:00 PM
Kelli, congratulations on making the first round of the contest, best of luck...Raul
Login to Reply
Date: 9/25/2009 3:17:00 PM
Just dropping by to add--Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen
Login to Reply
Date: 9/24/2009 3:54:00 PM
Congrats!! Love Light Truth Patricia
Login to Reply
Date: 9/24/2009 10:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals Kelli. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 6/27/2009 11:09:00 AM
Congratulations Kelli on your wonderful writing being featured this week here at the Soup!!
Login to Reply
Date: 6/27/2009 6:35:00 AM
Beautiful poem Kelli, warm congratulations on your featured poem>>James
Login to Reply
Date: 6/25/2009 10:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Kelli. May you have many more. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 6/25/2009 9:37:00 AM
If you write this well. you should never feel out of place in a place of beauty. Congratulations on your featured write "Awakening." Vince
Login to Reply
Date: 6/23/2009 1:39:00 PM
Welcome and congratulations. Ernilando
Login to Reply
Date: 6/21/2009 6:31:00 PM
Nice use of imagery to convey your thoughts in your poem. Congratulations on having it featured. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
Login to Reply
Date: 6/12/2009 2:54:00 PM
i like this poem mom i love you love,shi
Login to Reply
Date: 5/27/2009 5:19:00 PM
Great imagery! You are not out of place you are a beauty too! Light & Love
Login to Reply
Date: 5/26/2009 8:12:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Kelli. I am hoping to read many more poems written by you. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 5/23/2009 8:54:00 PM
Awww what a lovely write Kelli, keep writing -Jessica
Login to Reply
Date: 5/23/2009 3:59:00 AM
Kelli, I must admit that I am a little partial to nature poems. It falls just beneath God and family in my list of loved things. (Oh, writing is in there, too!) I'm smiling. You have captured the joy of nature with your words. By the way, the more you go there, the less frightening the night becomes. I enjoyed reading your poem. Your talent shows through your words. Keep writing. God bless you. And welcome to Poetry Soup. Always, Dane Ann
Login to Reply
Date: 5/21/2009 1:04:00 PM
Nice.
Login to Reply
Date: 5/21/2009 1:01:00 PM
Hi Kelli You're a nature lover too. So intune to nature's spirit you are!This is such a mesmerizing walk you take us on. Just love it. Think you will love my latest. Truly enjoyed this lovely poem. Great job! Take care Love Light Truth Patricia
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things