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Autumn's cool

the return of crisp”,
so poetically she hinted

her smile was bright
her chemise was softly
divulging the vivid beneath

So I braved the return of 
Autumns cool
and her breathtaking display,
and covered the brilliant her;

with my coat

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  1. Date: 11/19/2011 4:25:00 PM
    Hey James...those diamantes ARE very easy...let me have a sneak peak when u eventually write one. I know it will be excellent. Have a great weekend. Gwendolen

  1. Date: 11/6/2011 1:24:00 AM
    my fav season! great peace, loved that part... lucent... very appealing.

  1. Date: 11/3/2011 1:54:00 PM
    Dear James, please let me know Noah's explanation of where crickets go. Children often have keener insight than the rest of us. Remember "The Emporer's New Clothes"? Noah will tell it like he sees it. Thanks for stopping by, my friend. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 11/2/2011 5:56:00 PM
    Lovely piece James!!! Always, Laura

  1. Date: 11/2/2011 1:12:00 PM
    Just wanted to wish you and Noah a very happy holiday season, James. Love you, Carolyn

  1. Date: 11/1/2011 6:23:00 AM
    enjoyed reading sounds naughty on this cold put a cheer in my chill!!

  1. Date: 10/31/2011 9:33:00 PM
    WOW!!!! Dear Brother, BEAUTIFUL..Give me a call, lost your number with my old cell. No longer on FB. How's Noah & Jim. Your sis Joan.

  1. Date: 10/31/2011 3:01:00 PM
    So alluring is your poetic hand..I guess you were one who had snow in your area..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Sara

  1. Date: 10/29/2011 12:44:00 PM
    sultry lines of finesse and romance James.. always such a lovely playful presentatiion my friend..enticing the mind and exciting the soul ..while capturing the heart completely.. luv..

  1. Date: 10/28/2011 4:47:00 PM
    So subtle, so cool, so James - dear James. Alway that sly eroticism with just the right touch of humor.

  1. Date: 10/28/2011 6:32:00 AM
    Thank you so much for sharing your love of poetry with us James. I hope that you find continued inspiration that you may write and share your poetry for many years to come. Wishing you an amazing weekend. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/28/2011 12:40:00 AM
    I really enjoyed this one. It's romantic and sweet.

  1. Date: 10/27/2011 6:35:00 PM
    How tenderly you treat her, James. Your romantic words made me sigh. She's a lucky lady to have a man like you! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 10/27/2011 5:57:00 PM
    Jimmy....1st. thank you for your comments, as usual, you make me smile! 2nd, your art here breathes fresh love, original beauty! good on yer! jimbo

  1. Date: 10/27/2011 1:22:00 PM
    He is such a gentleman ;) you manage to make me smile once again James.. no suprise there, I just love this!! Hope your week has been good thus far, love Wilma

  1. Date: 10/27/2011 10:42:00 AM
    I hope one soul will get the; distended picture ! *smiles* ...........much love y'all

  1. Date: 10/27/2011 10:00:00 AM
    A gentleman offering your coat. Unique write James. love phyl

  1. Date: 10/27/2011 9:31:00 AM
    Egad! Chivalry, then, is not dead. Bless you, Sir James and your lady. Love, daver