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Autumn's Beauty

I’ve seen Autumn’s beauty, dear mother nature has given birth- Such magnificence brought to the splendor of the earth. Have you seen the elegance of the sunset's view? Such grace it brings when setting in the western skies- I hear the humming of a seasoned leaf as it delicately flies. The pastures bring delight with all the different hues, as the roses fade away and replaced with cool crisp dew- I awake in the morning with such astounding surprise. green lawns turn g o l d e n blades lay on the crimson ground- blazed embers release comfort moonlit soft cool breeze craving the sweet scent of warmth- autumnal days bring fresh life ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ 1 Couplet A-A Rhyme: A-B-B-A-A-B Sedoka 5-7-7-5-7-7 Date Written: September 22, 2016

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Date: 9/16/2018 5:59:00 PM
A beautiful combination of three wonderful forms of poetry, Laura, where our lovely Autumn comes to life. Congratulations on your Podium win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 9/14/2018 9:46:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Laura. Well penned.
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Date: 9/22/2016 8:41:00 PM
Lovely, I look forward to what this might inspire LuLoo...
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Date: 9/22/2016 3:01:00 PM
hmmm, is this a new contest you are doing? I better look and see. I really like the idea of this, using the forms and doing it about autumn!
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Date: 9/22/2016 12:24:00 PM
WOW I am inspired LuLoo I love this season and will have fun trying to write as beautifully as you have in this poem:-) hugs jan xx
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