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Autumn Sensations

Colorful symphonies sound As red and gold bells fall down, Shook loose by crisp cool air, Tinkling their way to the ground. Displayed on the limbs of trees Are rich orange marmalade leaves, Visions of autumn’s dessert Tasting sweetly upon the breeze. Autumn brews warm concoctions With auras of perfection And richly spiced aromas, Which soothe our frayed emotions. Fall’s festive nature brings out A spirited dancing shout And lovely celebrations With beauty bursting about. © 08-16-2012 For: Autumn's Beauty Contest

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Date: 9/18/2012 6:25:00 PM
This is beautiful. So vivid, You created such beautiful pictures with this. Talent. I really like this! I think I will favorite it!
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Date: 9/18/2012 1:16:00 PM
I like the explosion of the senses in this one. Lots of sound, color and motion. Enjoyed muchissimo. Love, daver
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Date: 9/14/2012 7:53:00 PM
wow,I really like yours a LOT. Loved the mention of marmalade for the orange color and the mention of spiced aromas. Way to get the senses engaged!!!
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Date: 9/14/2012 2:29:00 PM
Love the spirit and sensation ,,, it explodes with color... always~ PD
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Date: 8/29/2012 9:49:00 AM
My favorite time of year Tanya and you entice the moment of arrival to hurry. Seems summer heat can wear thin after awhile. Loved your verse! :)
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Date: 8/23/2012 4:08:00 PM
Man! Give me some apple butter. Your making me hungry. Nice poem Tanya, I think the results are out. You deserved to place. But like the leaves that will be falling. Another season will be calling. Take care. :)
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Date: 8/23/2012 1:03:00 PM
Well done, Tanya! Best wishes in the contest. xoxo - Laila
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Date: 8/23/2012 7:29:00 AM
Very soon it will be autumn. Another "changing" of the seasons! Great poem! JP
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Date: 8/22/2012 12:27:00 PM
what a colorful, flowing scene, tanya... breathtaking metaphors; lovely..:) huggs and best wishes!
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Date: 8/22/2012 5:43:00 AM
Wonderful portrait you present here, Tanya, enjoyed.
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Date: 8/19/2012 9:53:00 PM
Autumn is coming - Football and cooler days. You capture the season in your well done quatrains. Have you ever read the Fitzgerald translation of Omar Khayam's Rubiyat? Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 8/18/2012 10:08:00 PM
good rhym hereTanya. Flow and content is good too. besides I like maramalade.
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Date: 8/17/2012 8:40:00 PM
Love the imagery in this. Well done, Tanya! Best wishes in the contest. Love, Kim
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Date: 8/17/2012 5:38:00 PM
Lovely description of the coming fall season, Tanya...reads like a winner to me! - Tim
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Date: 8/17/2012 2:46:00 PM
What a beautiful write my friend! I truly love this inspirational poem here Tanya! This is a wondrous piece! Great Work!!
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