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Autumn Leaves

Autumn Leaves Golden Lovers I can see you; try not to hide. How beautiful you dance side to side. I can see you in my dreams at night Wondering, should I trust my sight? How can I kiss you my little leaf? From the beginning wondering if; One slight storm or one little wind Bring us together until the end. Which one is better, which one is worst? Drowning in water or dying of thirst. Spring is gone, summer is past Autumn is falling faster and fast. Hope to touch you when we fall Golden Lovers love the Fall. Step gently when you walk, Speak softly when you talk. Thousands of Lovers if they could, Making the autumn understood! Haloo 1/8/11

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Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 10/14/2022 12:37:00 PM

Wonderful poem! Very creative! I love autumn, and the falling of leaves remind me of transient life. Thanks for your visit to my page.

Paul Callus

Date: 10/30/2018 4:41:00 AM

Glad I went delving in your earlier posts, Pashang. This is lovely and you creatively entwine nature with love. Regards // paul

Pashang Salehi
Date: 11/5/2018 2:58:00 AM

Thanks Paul... I'm glad you like it.

Jan Allison

Date: 2/9/2018 11:16:00 AM

I'd love to see one of your paintings accompany this beautiful autumnal romantic gem:-) Such lovely imagery Pashang:-) hugs jan x

Pashang Salehi
Date: 2/9/2018 11:32:00 AM

You are so nice Jan....

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 3/2/2016 3:33:00 PM

How beautiful to read hearts in tune with nature and leaves. Hope you are feeling better. This made my heart happy. SuZ

Pashang Salehi
Date: 3/3/2016 11:16:00 AM

Thank you Suzanne...I am so glad that this work of mine made you happy... LHH ... Love, health, happiness for you... Pashang

Vladislav Raven

Date: 1/12/2016 5:49:00 PM

Well Pashang your piece does sing so gently. I do Love the concept of the poem and i always Love the Love. Your heart sings so gently into the piece. A definite seven for the golden leaves, may they ever dance on Love's breeze....Vladislav.

Pashang Salehi
Date: 1/12/2016 11:44:00 PM

Thank you my friend for being so kind. I love to Love as well.

Pashang Salehi

Date: 11/16/2015 6:01:00 PM

Such a beautiful name Pandita! Thank you for all kind words.Thousands of Lovers if they could, making the autumn understood!

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 11/17/2015 12:43:00 PM

Thank you so much, Pashang, for the kind compliments about my name - happy you like it! Pandita"

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 11/16/2015 10:11:00 AM

Such beautiful autumn leaves dancing throughout this lovely piece! I love the amazing imagery, my friend! Have a wonderful day and a 7! Pandita

Pashang Salehi
Date: 11/16/2015 6:05:00 PM

Such a beautiful name Pandita! Thank you for all kind words.Thousands of Lovers if they could, making the autumn understood!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 10/30/2015 5:06:00 AM

What a beauty Pashang! Congrats on awesome win!

Pashang Salehi
Date: 10/30/2015 10:18:00 AM

You're so kind Doctor... No more fear of becoming. winning or losing both welcoming.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/29/2015 5:09:00 PM

Pashing , though this is not haiku, I think it is a lovely poem. Congrats on your win.

Skat A

Date: 10/28/2015 1:20:00 AM

Pashang, Congratulations on your awesome Autumn win. **SKAT**

Pashang Salehi
Date: 10/28/2015 12:56:00 PM

Thanks SKAT, it seems that you're the only person that is reading my work. Please tell me, is sugar sweeter or He who makes sugar?

Joan Donnelly Ellis

Date: 10/22/2015 12:29:00 PM

Maybe Pashang . Thank you. LOL

Joan Donnelly Ellis

Date: 10/22/2015 9:59:00 AM

Delightful !

Pashang Salehi
Date: 10/22/2015 11:15:00 AM

Thank you Joan..... I read your IF, I said it once that ..... if you plant the IF, the MAYBE will grow! Good luck with all your IFs.

Diane Christian

Date: 10/12/2015 3:20:00 PM

very nice

Pashang Salehi
Date: 10/17/2015 1:37:00 PM

Thanks