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Autumn Fog

Remember when it hovered there, Skimming the brutal ground? A translucent veil - Never blocking the sun, But softening its glow. It parted when we passed, Mist retreating to our little sides. We pretended we were spirits Lost in the places spirits go - Wading through the heavens, Worlds deep in tangled fantasy. Until reality eroded our game, Melting the clouds away. But I was never sad - no, Never sad when it cleared, For it revealed majestic Autumn - Quietly perfect, much like you. And every year I wade through fog, Tears falling with the leaves, And think of you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/3/2013 11:40:00 PM
In your usual beautiful style this one is, Heather. Bitter sweet love. I am glad I stuck it out and found a poem to respond to this time. I need to go backwards with all your oldies and make sure of ones I have not seen yet.
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Date: 2/26/2013 1:37:00 PM
Beautiful work...I especially love the last 4 lines
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Date: 12/5/2012 8:00:00 AM
Congrats on your win in Janette Fisher's sponsored contest Heather. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/30/2012 12:06:00 PM
Heather, congratulations with your awesome win,, always~pd
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Date: 11/30/2012 5:23:00 AM
Congratulations once again Heather xx
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Date: 11/12/2012 4:00:00 PM
Wonderful poetry my poet friend. You made my day reading such amazing pieces. I shall be dropping by again. Hugs Michael
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Date: 10/30/2012 2:11:00 PM
A lovely poem for Janette's contest. Seems like we both must have been looking at fog. Thanks for the comments. love phyl
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Date: 10/30/2012 10:12:00 AM
Loved the imagery in this poem.
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Date: 10/24/2012 3:11:00 PM
Very beautiful. Flowed easily. I liked it very much.
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Date: 10/24/2012 12:29:00 PM
Thank you so much for sharing your wonderful poetry Heather. I enjoyed reading it and wish you all the best in your writing always. Love, Carol
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