Autumn Leaves - the American Sonnet Style

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~Autumn Leaves~ (New American Sonnet) The days are getting just a little cold Summers leaving bringing us all a change Temperature drops, and weather acts strange Nature wears a new dress and reacts so bold The birds leave their nests and just fly away Skies changes hues in no little time Nature plays best music when is bed time As fall transforms and makes all things brand-new As leaves start to change hues in every single tree They seem to fall one by one to the ground My eyes can't help but see beauty around As fall cool breeze makes me at times just glee The days start getting now a little chill And all over the place there is a thrill. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2010 September .21. 2016

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Tom Arnone

Date: 9/22/2016 5:07:00 PM

I wonder how much more enjoyable this fine poem would sound using the traditional English sonnet form (which I am still trying to learn). :-)

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 10/14/2016 1:37:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly Tom, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Deeply appreciated:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light God bless you!:)D