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The Land of Wander

How sweet it is to heed For a gentle wave and nod A seemingly soul of blend A man of likely land of nod How serendipitous it might For her to be your significant Like a lady magistrate Who lays down the law and rule Sigh…how I wish I could be her But to remain a dreamer Is like keeping a treasure Alas, can’t fool any cavalier In a bit of meliorating manner Redeeming is like a rapture Like wandering with full of pleasure In the East of Eden - land of wander 03.22.16 Second place "Love Story" hosted by Silent One 12.01.17

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Date: 11/5/2017 9:42:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Moon Flower.
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Date: 11/5/2017 7:40:00 AM
This beautiful poem did not deserve to be on the bottom of the list! Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 6/14/2016 2:08:00 AM
The theme, the rhyme, the imagery, all excellent. Congratulations for the Contest-Any....
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Date: 6/13/2016 7:45:00 AM
Moon Flower, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
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Date: 6/12/2016 5:11:00 PM
A big congratulations for your win , Moon Flower. I remember a movie East of Eden! love that reference to the first garden.
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Date: 6/12/2016 3:43:00 PM
Very lovely, Moon Flower. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 6/12/2016 11:57:00 AM
Congratulations Moon Flower on the Island of Fantasy contest.
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