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At the Pawnshop- Contest

I spied it in the window, wasn’t very plain to see Cos the glass was very mucky, the price I cannot read Tentatively went into the shop, was dark couldn’t see the way The man was old and bent, I hesitantly asked to see the tray It was a lovely emerald, green as the grass at home Looked longing at it, wishing it was my own The old man said try it on I smiled and did as I was told Fitted as though made for me, wish I could mark it as sold He said looking at me, your eyes match this lovely stone Belonged to my dear wife she would love you to call it your own I said I couldn’t afford it, he said there is a way Would you call in each evening cook me a meal to pay For the last 6 months I have done that also cleaned the place some Looks a better place to live and work, it now feels more like home

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Date: 7/9/2013 9:58:00 AM
Congrats on your winning poem. well done :)
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Seren Roberts
Date: 7/9/2013 10:32:00 AM
Thank you Seosamh ...Seren
Date: 7/9/2013 7:38:00 AM
Seren, I enjoyed this wonderful tale. Congrats on your fine win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Seren Roberts
Date: 7/9/2013 10:33:00 AM
Hi Conne many thx ....Seren
Date: 7/9/2013 12:49:00 AM
ha I love it .... congrats all the way :-) ~SKAT~
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Seren Roberts
Date: 7/9/2013 3:50:00 AM
thanks SKAT ...Seren
Date: 7/8/2013 10:41:00 PM
Very nice happy ending. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Seren Roberts
Date: 7/9/2013 3:51:00 AM
Thank you Joyce
Date: 7/8/2013 9:52:00 PM
I laughed after reading this one. Congrats .Gl
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Seren Roberts
Date: 7/9/2013 3:51:00 AM
Hi goodness Thanks for stopping by ...Seren
Date: 7/8/2013 4:32:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Seren
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Seren Roberts
Date: 7/8/2013 6:55:00 PM
Thank you Robert ...Seren
Date: 7/8/2013 3:16:00 PM
Seren,, a might fun theme... congratulations in the pawn shop contest...xox~ LINDA
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Seren Roberts
Date: 7/8/2013 6:55:00 PM
Thx Linda ....Seren
Date: 7/8/2013 2:53:00 PM
Wonderful, wonderful story telling! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Seren Roberts
Date: 7/8/2013 6:54:00 PM
Thank you Debbie ...Seren
Date: 6/20/2013 5:27:00 AM
Hi seren, Awhh this is so sweet , loved it!!!!! Really touching:) Great poem, thankyou 4 sharing:0)
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Seren Roberts
Date: 7/8/2013 6:54:00 PM
Thanks Cherie ....Seren
Date: 6/14/2013 5:56:00 AM
It almost feels as if you have done something like this before, very awesome write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this morning! What a tremendous piece, Great Work!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 6/15/2013 4:10:00 AM
Thanks for the comment Russell, lol you sit here alone...Seren

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