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As Long As My Music Lives...

Don't make me promises of riches, or expose me to false visions; I live with meager means, to surpass the wisdom of kings: and as long as my music lives... there won't be struggle or need! As a youngster,I dreamed without illusion, knowing which dreams were lasting and real: discarding those causing deprivation, not to be deceived by their vivid feel! Notes of unwritten symphonies battered this head...'till they quietly entered, and at night-time at the same hour,I used to hear their harmony as they sweetly played; was that a gift I should have pursued, or let it go to waste as if it never existed? Until tomorrow shone with the splendor of the eternal sun, nothing I kept for myself or expected hand-outs without deserving them; this honesty was part of my integrity... and everyone saw it and was amazed! I swam through those rough waters of an inclement river, suffocating,and not saying a word; and finally my frustration found an outlet of relief... my calm ocean awaited me at the end of my journey; and as long as my music lives, so will this undaunted spirit! Copyright 2008 by Andrew Crisci

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Date: 4/21/2009 9:08:00 AM
As an amateur singersongwriter, I can certainly identify with this one. Congrats on having it featured
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Date: 4/21/2009 7:55:00 AM
Congrats Andrew on your poem being featured. Music lives forever and we each write our own song. Vince
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Date: 4/21/2009 12:39:00 AM
How lovely, congratulations on this piece being featured this week, kindest thoughts, Anna-Marie.
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Date: 4/20/2009 4:37:00 PM
Congrats on your excellent featured write of the week! Love, Shar
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Date: 4/20/2009 2:35:00 AM
Congrats on your featured poem this week Andrew.Rgds Brian
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Date: 4/19/2009 9:46:00 PM
Andrew, congrats on being featured, nice work...Raul
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Date: 4/19/2009 5:56:00 PM
Congratulations on your lovely poetry being featured this week. GB and Best Wishes, Always Tyesha
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Date: 4/19/2009 2:57:00 PM
congrats on your much deserved feature this week. "and as long as my music lives, so will this undaunted spirit!" beautifully written!
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Date: 4/19/2009 1:57:00 PM
Interesting reflection. Keep that "undaunted spirit." Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 4/19/2009 1:13:00 PM
Andrew, congratulations on your poem being featured. Mine is is also featured this week. Keep on posting. Ernilando
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Date: 4/19/2009 9:59:00 AM
Andrew - Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week, God Bless, mj
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