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As I See Him

He has the chiseled features of a handsome Nordic God, With perfectly placed brown eyes beneath a noble brow. A skilled sculptor planed those cheekbones up so very high And decided a deep dimple to his chin to then endow. His arms are strong but gentle and make me feel so safe. I want to be held in them as long as I shall live. He has a sunny nature and he’d rather love than fight. Before I’d give him up, I’d rather have my heart pierced with a shiv. For twenty years he’s filled my life with unadulterated joy, And is a loving father to his daughters and his son.…….. And now this present is the past, it has been fifty years, Since God sent angels for him and I felt my life was done. I have his features firmly planted in my heart and mind. I see them when I’m sleeping and every minute I’m awake. As I’m aging he grows younger and more handsome every day, But I’m hoping in God’s Heaven that will not a problem make. Written fro Frank's contest "Word Portrait" April 15, 2013

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Date: 5/2/2013 4:45:00 PM
Congratulations Joyce...
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Date: 5/1/2013 6:16:00 PM
Joyce, a nice winning poem in the "WORD PORTRAIT" contest :-) *LINDA
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Date: 4/30/2013 7:12:00 PM
A beautiful and touching write Joyce....I can feel the love, was a pleasure to read. Congrats on your win! Hugs
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Date: 4/30/2013 10:10:00 AM
Joyce, very touching. loving poem, I enjoyed reading it. Congratulations.
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Date: 4/30/2013 7:51:00 AM
I have often given the same thought, as you spoke in your last two lines, about the loved ones whom I have lost.....so touching and eloquently written dear Joyce!
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Date: 4/17/2013 5:17:00 PM
How wonderful it would be to grow more handsome with age. Great write and I want whatever your husband is taking. Thanks for your kind words about my poem O'er the Battlements I Do Roam.
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Date: 4/16/2013 7:07:00 AM
Just lovely Joyce..
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Date: 4/16/2013 3:08:00 AM
Joyce, it's gorgeous! - Thank you. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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