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~As I Look At The Sky~ (Hourglass) I look at the sky and see clouds And light grows small as they go by Blush and cover sun as they flood I watch them as they cross the sky I see cloud change into weird shape But there are times when it turns gray Sometimes the sky is a blue grape And that's when the sun fades away Looking at the sky is quite nice As they glow in the night so bright I'd love to watch it more than twice And count stars in the sky at night And count stars in the sky at night I'd love to watch it more than twice As they glow in the night so bright Looking at the sky is quite nice And that's when the sun fades away Sometimes the sky is a blue grape But there are times when it turns gray I see cloud change into weird shape I watch them as they cross the sky Blush and cover sun as they flood And light grows small as they go by I look at the sky and see clouds Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2010 October.20.2015

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Date: 10/20/2015 2:41:00 PM
WOW!!!!! You inspire me with your creativity Dorian - i have not seen this form before it is truly stunning whichever way you read the poem :-) hugs jan xx 7
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Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 10/23/2015 12:17:00 PM
Thank you so kindly,Jan, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Very deeply appreciate your very kind visit, comments, the 7 and all my dear friend:) Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light God bless you always!:)D

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