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As I Hold Her Under This, Merciful God's Moon

As I Hold Her Under This, Merciful God's Moon Her heart sang, the tune broke my lost song life without her, how did I ever get along Clouds once loomed over my every long day before she made me bow and silently pray Please keep this dream in my lost life remove painful sting and life filled with strife Let her dance and sing another sweet tune as I hold her under this, merciful God's moon Hold time back as I find a miracle now give me wisdom to find out just how To win her heart to join with this lost soul her love and life is my blessed newfound goal I pray that this new branch bears sweet fruits as we seal our fate and our tree sets firm roots! 12,05, 2014

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Shadow Hamilton

Date: 7/27/2015 6:03:00 AM

great pen Robert congrats on win hugs

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/27/2015 2:32:00 AM

Yet another exquisite poetry and superb win Robert! Big congrats!

Jan Allison

Date: 7/26/2015 4:55:00 PM

a very touching write Robert - many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Skat A

Date: 7/26/2015 4:33:00 PM

Robert, Congratulations on Your Best Poem #2 win. **SKAT**

Gary Bateman

Date: 12/8/2014 2:24:00 PM

Robert, Most Outstanding!! This rhymed sonnet is quite touching and most emotive. I agree with Paul Callus about the closing couplet. It's quite beautiful and the imagery you use portrays a most compelling message of oneness and affirmation. Another 7+++++ and a definite FAV!! Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary