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The Gathering

. An argument brews... Interlude of rest is stirred by distant thunder Inspired by Raul's "Inspiration in Haiku" contest

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Date: 7/7/2009 2:19:00 PM

Carrie ~this is a terrific haiku great use of imagery! Laura :)

Date: 7/6/2009 3:59:00 PM

This is an awesome haiku. I like the imagery a lot. There is always a silver lining. Great job! ~Joseph

Date: 6/28/2009 8:28:00 PM

I really like this one. You've painted a wonderful picture. Lots of Love, Misty

Date: 6/27/2009 3:30:00 PM

Thanks for the support Carrie...Raul

Date: 6/27/2009 11:40:00 AM

Beautifully done, Carrie ... takes me away to a wonderful afternoon nap ... smile ...

Date: 6/26/2009 7:00:00 PM

What a beautiful poetess you are, Carrie! poet butterfly

Date: 6/26/2009 5:36:00 AM

I am writing one for this contest and it is not easy to write about a pic in haiku form..you did it well and I wish you all the best.

Date: 6/25/2009 11:47:00 PM

Best wishes with this one Carrie.Will forward you prize early next week.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Date: 6/25/2009 2:25:00 PM

Um the Book "When Rain Clouds Gather" Should so Use this As a Slogan XP