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April Showers Bring May Flowers- For Anacreontic Verse 3

Anacreontic Verse 3 Cool crystal raindrops scrolled down the palm leaves swishing and drooling over sloping eaves The scarlet lilies reddening their cheeks bugled open to the bees tranquilly snoring in their hives under painted roofs Last eve I sat in the shady arbour luxuriously enjoying the rain playing salsa with these blooming girls in crimson skirts in a signature scented floral studio painting hues of red 20 lines of 5 syllables each April 6, 2016 For Edward Ebbs

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Date: 4/27/2016 4:10:00 PM
Nicely done, Balveen. Congratulations on your nice placement in the Anacreontic verse contest! Hugs, Sandra
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 5/6/2016 4:09:00 AM
Thanks Sandra!
Date: 4/6/2016 4:11:00 PM
wow, lots of great imagery. VERY well done, my friend.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 4/7/2016 4:37:00 AM
Glad you consider it so, Andrea!
Date: 4/6/2016 5:13:00 AM
very descriptive and beautiful Balveen and I like the alliteration :-) hugs Jan xx
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 4/6/2016 7:20:00 AM
With all my love & thanks!

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