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Anti-Climactic

When winter hammers us with snow And sleet and freezing weather, We anxiously hope Nature Somehow gets her act together. We count the days ‘til spring arrives With breezes soft and mellow, And wait to see the daffodils So in-your-face with yellow. This winter past, where I reside, Broke every rule created. We didn’t have a drop of snow, Which we’d anticipated. Instead the flowers poked their heads Before they were expected, And heavy winter jackets hung In closets, quite neglected. Officially, on calendars, Today we welcome spring. In prior years, we’d celebrate The joy this date would bring. This year, however, somehow spring Is lacking in appeal. Without the winter climax, It’s just not a real big deal. Let’s hope this season lasts a while ‘Cause it would be a bummer If there’s another letdown and In April we start summer!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/21/2012 6:15:00 AM
LOL, very witty write, Ilene.
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Date: 3/20/2012 11:40:00 PM
This is you have done superbly. The rhythm and flow was quiet smooth. the rhymes were perfect. An amazing write.
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Date: 3/20/2012 7:20:00 PM
well, summer in April would not be as bad as winter arriving very late! I heard it was almost 80's or maybe it WAS in 80's back east. I think we are in for ONE HOT summer. end of days I fear. I enjoyed this one a lot.
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Date: 3/20/2012 4:36:00 PM
humorous,it makes my heart sing i wouldn't miss a bad winter i guess one would appreciate spring more,a lovely poeml
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Date: 3/20/2012 4:34:00 PM
Ilene I love your poem and I am very jealous of your weather. I live in the Pacific N.W and we had a lovely winter until now when it is supposed to be spring we are getting the worst of our winter. Usually we have beautiful springs and I hope this cold, snow, sleet , rain lets up soon. Thank you for reading and commenting. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/20/2012 3:37:00 PM
Nice description of the weird weather - Oregon hasn't gotten out of winter yet!
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