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Another Blue Sky---Sf

~A distant island still undiscovered, nearing magnetically to its mystery, distancing me from myself every moment, remembering to forget the return path, even my earth is puzzled,...revolve or rotate? another blue sky beyond this one is calling.~ ================000================

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/14/2017 11:03:00 PM
So THIS is what you were talking about!! Soupmail and a BIG CONGRATS on the book.
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Date: 11/21/2013 12:50:00 PM
Way to go..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 11/18/2013 7:07:00 PM
Kash, , Awesome free verse win.. xox~ Linda,
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Date: 11/18/2013 7:20:00 AM
Beautiful. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 11/18/2013 12:06:00 AM
kashi bud, did i miss this?... such a melodious, mellow verse deserving of a stunning slot... warm congrats..yes!..:) huggs
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Date: 11/17/2013 8:09:00 PM
Way to go Kash. There is a lot to think of here. Congratulations.
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Date: 11/17/2013 6:27:00 PM
KAsh, even after all the things I said about loving this poem a few years ago, I still did not remember you wrote it. It is still very nice to see this one. Congrats for your win.
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Date: 10/2/2011 1:35:00 AM
oh my gosh, I never would have caught that if you had not told me since you called it free verse, Kash. Well, isn't that cool that I had this strange desire to fave it!!! I'm so glad I did that now. Thank you!!
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Date: 10/1/2011 8:00:00 PM
gosh, this seems so deep, Kash. ANother one showing your artist soul. It's mystical. Think I'll fave it! (Joe is gonna be home a lot now that he has lost another job, so it looks like my souping will be somewhat curtailed.) Sure hope I find some time late tonight to catch up. Off I go again! Just came on to post something. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 10/1/2011 7:09:00 PM
Serene and uplifting Kashi, makes me stop and dream awhile.
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Date: 10/1/2011 3:42:00 AM
very hopeful and uplifting! love,Deb
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Date: 10/1/2011 1:09:00 AM
Mysterious places are the best to write about, Kash. You have become the tour guide for the mental get-a-way. Very inviting....even what lies beyond! How lovely your blog! Gwendolen
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Date: 9/30/2011 3:49:00 PM
Deep and moving, Kash. We are always discovering new places, sometimes forgetting how to return to the past. I love the way you end this with a spiritually uplifting last line! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/30/2011 3:03:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your work..A very good one indeed..I am glad that I chose this one to review this afternoon..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara
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Date: 9/30/2011 12:07:00 PM
wow Kash this is stunning..luv that nearing magnetically to its mystery line.. awesome piece..happy weekend..luv..
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Date: 9/30/2011 5:49:00 AM
A lovely dreamy kind of poem. We all have some beautiful place under a blue sky that we can go, whether it be in our head or in reality. A good, inventive write.
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