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~And Then Again~ ( Trine ) I just love smelling the roses with all their sweet perfume Enjoy watching them in front of me thrive and then just bloom Pretty multi-colored butterflies hover and drink from top It's so sad when I see one by one the roses' petals just drop Then I hear a very loud sound coming from up above the sky And the rain starts to fall so hard and the clouds seem to cry Then the sun completely hides and in its place I hear another loud boom But I know that sunshine again will come back when all this rain will just stop And then hopefully once more lovely roses will bloom and beautiful butterflies again will fly. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2015 October.19.2015

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Afolabi Muideen

Date: 10/19/2015 5:31:00 PM

A lovely write friend. The flow of your beautiful write is eloquent and excellent.........A.M.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 10/23/2015 11:56:00 AM

Thank you ever so kindly, A.M , for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Very deeply appreciate your very kind visit, and all my friend:) Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light God bless you always!:)D

Robert Lindley

Date: 10/19/2015 8:32:00 AM

Fine poem equals the beautiful pics my friend. Super 7 from me!

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 10/23/2015 11:55:00 AM

Thank you ever so kindly, Robert, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Very deeply appreciate your very kind visit, comments the super 7 and all my friend:) Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light God bless you always!:)D

Lin Lane

Date: 10/19/2015 7:15:00 AM

Hi, Dorian. I really enjoyed your poem, and I loved my journey through your garden of roses and butterflies as I found my way there. God has created such beautiful gifts for us, hasn't He? Your love for roses might take you to read one I posted recently...Weep Not For Withered Petals. Thank you for sharing a glimpse of your garden. ~ Lin ~

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 10/23/2015 11:54:00 AM

Thank you ever so kindly, Lin, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Very deeply appreciate your very kind visit and all:) Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light God bless you always!:)D

Edlynn Nau

Date: 10/19/2015 12:43:00 AM

Love this very much. Nice imagery and like how the joy will be missed when the rain comes. Possibly think on tweaking the last verse to follow your rhyme scheme: perfume~bloom, top~drop, sky~cry...and then a triplet with boom, stop, and fly. While it winds up the poem it doesn't stick to your pattern. Jiggle this a bit and it will be delightful! Nice work.

Edlynn Nau
Date: 10/23/2015 1:36:00 PM

Oh I'm so sorry. How did I miss it was a Trine Poem in genre. I'm losing it! Ha! VERY NICE!

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 10/23/2015 11:52:00 AM

Thank you ever so kindly ,Edlynn, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my Trine poem.Very deeply appreciate your very kind visit and all:) Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light God bless you always!:)D