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And She Dies--

He searches for them and takes them unawares, As night turns day and day darkens, She was cut off before her prime, Weeping for a young departed soul As night turns day and day darkens, She dines with earthworms with impunity, Weeping for the young departed soul , Who can bail her from this abysmal sleep? She dines with earthworms with impunity, Her plan to become an octogenarian dashed, Who can bail her from this abysmal sleep? Hopes and aspiration buried in oblivion, Her plan to become an octogenarian dashed a vicious guest which the host cannot reject, Hopes and aspiration buried in oblivion, Cancer and liver failure ruin a lovely gem, A vicious guest which the host cannot reject, She was cut off before her prime, Cancer and liver failure ruin a lovely gem, He searches for them and takes them unawares.

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Date: 8/17/2015 2:39:00 PM
Olusegun, :-) Congratulations with your wonderful win! *SKAT*
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Date: 8/15/2015 1:35:00 PM
Congrats on 3rd place!... Such a sad story that tugs at the reader's heart... You've done well with this difficult form. Really great work!
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Date: 8/15/2015 1:30:00 PM
beautiful but oh so sad - many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/21/2014 5:27:00 AM
Brilliant write. Congratulations on the fine win, olusegun
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Date: 3/19/2014 5:10:00 PM
Olusegun, congratulations... love ~Linda
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Date: 3/19/2014 2:21:00 AM
Awesome win, Olusegun, love Skat
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Date: 3/18/2014 11:15:00 PM
nice win
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Date: 6/2/2013 6:36:00 PM
Age and death come to all of use and the worms will feed eventually. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 6/1/2013 5:30:00 PM
Interesting lines penned for the contest..Congrats on your great win..Sara
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Date: 6/1/2013 3:36:00 AM
many congrats my friend xx
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Date: 5/31/2013 8:03:00 PM
Olusegun, wonderful poem, you capture the strong emotions of the loss due to cancer, excellent form. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 5/31/2013 9:58:00 AM
Beautiful and sad. Very well written. Many congrats to you Olusegun on your well deserved win. AO
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Date: 5/31/2013 9:20:00 AM
Too real, and heart breaking......but beautifully written. My deep condolences......and yet my congratulations for your win. May it help to write of it.
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Date: 5/31/2013 7:34:00 AM
congrats on your win with this great pantoum Olusegun
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Date: 5/29/2013 3:16:00 AM
.... oh, so sad.... well written. - Luck in contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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