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Anacreontic Verse 2 --- Blue

A river of blue meanders through morning's mood to dwell with pools of scattered tears that drip anew around my shoes It floods my thoughts with old debris and I can't stop the memories Deep in a spell I dip my quill into hues of cobalt blue I'll write to you sad words to tell that dwell in the room without you But sparks of blue between the clouds are welcome now All the sky swells wide outside with blue again Sun is high and by and by I say goodbye to you and to the dawn's blue mood ________________________________________________ 1/16/16 For the contest: Anacreontic Verse 2 .....sponsored by Edward Ebbs

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Date: 1/28/2016 9:20:00 PM
CARRIE, CONGRATS, ON YOUR Anacreontic Verse 2- WIN. Luv ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/20/2016 11:43:00 AM
topping the list as always, carrie.. do write more often... congrats and huggs!
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Date: 1/20/2016 7:25:00 AM
congratulations, Carrie, on your big win in Ed's contest. Back to your piece, cobalt blue always makes me think of cancer treatments for some reason which adds to the sadness of your piece. I like the ending which is a great comparison of the two blues... blue skies vs. blue mood.
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Date: 1/20/2016 4:46:00 AM
Touching n serene Carrie.. congrats on top place win!
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Date: 1/19/2016 9:49:00 PM
Wonderfully written, Carrie. Just magical... Bobby
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Date: 1/19/2016 9:24:00 PM
Carrie,,, Congratulationson your Anacreontic Verse 2 win. Luv *Skat*
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Date: 1/19/2016 4:07:00 PM
Many congrats Carrie I'm honoured to share the top step with you:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/19/2016 1:40:00 PM
Carrie, a wonderful poem, congrats on top placement! -*smiles*-luloo
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Date: 1/19/2016 9:59:00 AM
You made excellent use of the 'blue' choice of colour, Carrie; indeed a very lovely poem which flows from sad to bright emotions. Congratulations on placing first! // paul
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Date: 1/19/2016 8:56:00 AM
Congratulations on a fine win in Ed's contest. A great choice for top honour.
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Date: 1/19/2016 8:18:00 AM
This is sooooo beautiful! Congratulations, dear Carrie on your top of the podium win! Well-deserved! Pandita
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Date: 1/19/2016 6:14:00 AM
Hi Carrie. Congrats on your #1 placement in the contest! ;-)
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Date: 1/18/2016 10:37:00 PM
Congrats on your win Carrie, and thank you for entering :)
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Date: 1/17/2016 7:48:00 PM
Lots of emotion and such an enjoyable read. I really like your entry and wish you all the best ... CayCay
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Date: 1/17/2016 4:11:00 PM
Perfect! Im going to fav this one. BG
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