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An Uncomfortable Silence

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An Uncomfortable Silence

Break the Hush (if you must!),
And be seduced by quiet Lust
That would, I fear, toss my trust
Into the fires of blood and dust
Muffled cries, I understand
Would hold My Heart in harmful hands,
And would I ever take a stand:
(Or simply sink in silent sands?)

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  1. Date: 12/23/2013 8:58:00 AM
    Chan The Man This is quite an interesting and different write. The uniqueness makes the reader think and gets a glimpse into your mind. HHHMM Is that a dangerous thing. LOL Love and Hugs Sweet Pea

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    Date: 12/23/2013 9:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for being the first to review, Sweet Pea and I love your new profile pic. Gotta check out your vids soon <3