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An Uncomfortable Silence

Break the Hush (if you must!), And be seduced by quiet Lust That would, I fear, toss my trust Into the fires of blood and dust Muffled cries, I understand Would hold My Heart in harmful hands, And would I ever take a stand: (Or simply sink in silent sands?)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 12/23/2013 8:58:00 AM
Chan The Man This is quite an interesting and different write. The uniqueness makes the reader think and gets a glimpse into your mind. HHHMM Is that a dangerous thing. LOL Love and Hugs Sweet Pea
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Date: 12/23/2013 9:19:00 AM
Thanks for being the first to review, Sweet Pea and I love your new profile pic. Gotta check out your vids soon <3

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