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An Opened Door, Steps On the Floor

I heard pages flipping As a sign of calling, We both needed each attention And we both realised there was a tension, At night we will wish a good Though there was a flowing mood, I closed the door without locking Thinking of going in without knocking, I could hear her voice talking over phone To wish she was in this bed refreshing my backbone, But she just waited And i just hesitated, An opened door Steps on the floor.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/9/2016 8:23:00 AM
Really liking the build-up in this piece, and great rhythm, Sello. P.S. Love how you rhymed "good" and "mood" - works especially well if you're Scottish!
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Sello Modiba
Date: 5/12/2016 3:20:00 AM
Thanks
Date: 5/6/2016 6:57:00 PM
a good sonnet,, thank you for sharing
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Date: 5/9/2016 6:50:00 AM
Thanks Skat A
Date: 5/6/2016 4:54:00 PM
I love the rhythm that flows naturally in your verse! Thanks for commenting on my poem, "Last Laugh".
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Date: 5/9/2016 6:51:00 AM
Appreciated

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