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An Evening With, Dinner and a Dance

Their evening starts With dinner and a dance It's taken many months To be standing in this stance Slow delightful moves As they move around the floor In their hearts they know Their evening cries for more The moment moves their wants As they share thoughts with a kiss The texture of their touch From their earlier evening wish Now their dance is over They sit and drink some wine And share chats and kisses Captured in their time Moving close together His hands start to walk Like an adventurer on her body As their gentle kissing locks At each and every button He opens, she heavenly sighs Revealing this lovely dove She's only for his eyes Her blouse now ajar His breath, she takes away Her tanned delightful cleavage Invites his hands to play Gentle as can be He glides to feel her charms Excitement shows through As she holds him in her arms His hands re-adventure Her torso he slowly crawls To reach his destination Her heavenly scented walls He zigs her inner thighs Like meandering river flows For he knows up ahead In her garden lies a rose Minutes pass with kisses Complimenting with passionate touch Her garden he has reached Allowing, she loves him such Her rose, with petal like frills Moist in the evening dew Her garden gate he enters She sighs, as she welcomes him through The walk he takes so slowly As he absorbs her inner walls Upon seeing her heart He's running ten feet tall The excitement in their hearts Is released and begins to flow A rush of groans and sighs All over their bodies, show Breathing peaks with kisses As they hold each other tight The Highlander and his Dove Declared their love tonight

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/27/2009 10:59:00 AM
Romance and love breathes from your pen James so effortlessly bright!
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Date: 7/27/2009 7:21:00 AM
Hey Mr. James: This is a very-long poem but I find it to be longivity in satisfaction and com- mitment. "I like it a lots".
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Date: 7/27/2009 4:30:00 AM
nice write. enjoyed reading it. loved it. always, cherica lynn <3
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Date: 7/26/2009 9:57:00 AM
great declaration of you and your dove's love,first dinner,than dancing,than love,you ve pictured an awesome moment for two people happily in love-beautiful write James-charma
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Date: 7/26/2009 8:59:00 AM
Most scintillating, beautiful, tasteful and delicious, not to mention steamy! I just love those lusty Highlanders! ~Trudy~
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Date: 7/25/2009 5:53:00 PM
This is a good rhyme, with a nice design Your reality becomes fantasy after the fourth stanza. Were they in a bar, club or at home? Bill
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Date: 7/25/2009 10:14:00 AM
Dude, I have poetry that is romantic, tasteful, but maybe a little to tasteless for this site. I believe that our poetry society might get a thrill from them... But The soup may not... Anyways, love is a subject that will never die, Each voice has its own way of describing love, and passion, this my friend is well written, with a capturing structure and rhyme scheme......EXCELLENT........:JP)
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Date: 7/25/2009 6:52:00 AM
Your romantic spirit is so breathtaking, James! I love the way this story unfolds, showing how love is recognized and expressed with great passion. You capture our hearts with this write! Love you, Carolyn
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Date: 7/25/2009 5:07:00 AM
Interesting writing. Very descriptive of your love and passion. Sara
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