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An Empty Realm – Part 3 The startled crowd his side did rush As slow upon the ground he fell Seeping blood, a worried hush “Your Majesty” a voice did yell Shoving bodies, pushing through A sentry wrought of silver chain “Find the healer” his command Echoed of this loud exclaim He helped the king to stand his feet An arm in offered steady sure A glance about, he’d not repeat Uncertain moments to endure Towards the castle, cobbled pace Another came, assistance felt And then appeared the healer’s face Before his king, he fell and knelt A weaker state with eyes now glass Consciousness began to seep “Bring him to the castle quick, the wound received near fatal deep” Once within the lighted glare Upon a bed of feathered fill The king was laid, comforted care With prayers of strength and endless will Breath now weak, pulsing slow The healer plied his knowledge true Pressure to the wounded flow Hoping best for what to do When then of listless tethered word Through thoughts of love and soft confide The king he spoke, these words were heard Summons my queen to here my side

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Date: 8/11/2019 8:51:00 PM
And it better the second time around!
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Date: 12/17/2016 10:46:00 PM
Oh my, the king is in for a big shock. Love the suspense in this serialized poem, Chris. Great job so far. A true classic in the making. If it don't kill him, guess it will make him stronger, right. Loving this poem so far. Love and joy to you.
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Chris Green
Date: 12/19/2016 8:37:00 AM
Thanks so much my friend.
Date: 12/14/2016 11:12:00 PM
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Date: 12/14/2016 6:17:00 PM
I third what Alexis and Darren said... I'm loving it!!! now I can't write more, I need to go to part 4... :O
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Date: 12/13/2016 11:38:00 AM
Yes, what Alexis said! Wow, you can tell a good story, I am enjoying this.
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Chris Green
Date: 12/13/2016 12:05:00 PM
I'm happy you are enjoying this my friend.
Date: 12/12/2016 4:05:00 PM
Hi Chris, The story is so good and well written. The king is wounded and summons the queen? I'm enjoying the suspense but how can they bring back the queen? I can't wait for the next part. Well done. A without a doubt seven: -) Alexis
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Chris Green
Date: 12/12/2016 4:13:00 PM
Thank you Alexis for always being so kind to me. Sorry but you'll have to wait until tomorrow to see what happens next. : )
Date: 12/12/2016 3:40:00 PM
Oh wow! Now it is really suspenseful Chris. Hurry up bring the Queen! :)
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Chris Green
Date: 12/12/2016 4:10:00 PM
Thank you my sweet friend. You'll have to wait till tomorrow for the next three parts.

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