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American Beauty

When at first I saw you The sun was setting It's rays danced right through You were tall and just stunning Dressed all up in cobalt blue As I passed by, my neck bending I knew what I had to do I acted fast, no hesitating Turning back, I ran to you A panic attack my heart was throbbing Eyes on your rack, I could only drool I paid cash for this beautiful machine. My Chevy Silverado

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/8/2013 2:44:00 PM
ha! you fooled me, indeed! congrats on your win!
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Date: 8/8/2013 10:01:00 AM
how nice bet you love it congrats Shadow x smiles
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Date: 8/7/2013 3:27:00 PM
- Congratulations on a wonderful first place! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/7/2013 9:38:00 AM
That last line..........omg......wasn't expecting ......loved it !! Great job!!
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Date: 8/7/2013 9:17:00 AM
A serious #1 poem My friend Mitch, Congratulations! :-) :-) thank you for making my day a nice one... When you have time enjoy the winners and my beautiful blog * Called "Title That Reminds Me Of You" http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=15763&PoetID=18720 ...always & forever *LINDA
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Date: 7/30/2013 6:41:00 AM
: )Of course Men are from mars and women are from.venus : ).. Of course-Your chevy silverado.. Amusing and entertaining poem Mitch
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Date: 7/28/2013 12:16:00 PM
Cool... I was thinking right till the end... well, this is just another "lust filled" poem... then the comparative to your car. So... us females will forever ponder that question?? What are men 'really' passionate about :)
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Date: 7/27/2013 3:16:00 PM
HA ! You had me thinking you paid for more than a glimpse of a rack... very clever and creative :)
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Date: 7/26/2013 11:10:00 PM
OH YES< now THAT is a real american beauty. Mine is an older style corvette with a wide hood, in ice blue!
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