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Amen

The slow time has now begun, when
flakes the size of quarters fall
adrift on gentle breezes again
filling the hollows in stone walls. 

In insular suspense we see
the slow time has now begun, when
snowfall nuzzles the trunks of trees,
blankets the fields, lies in the glen. 

A time for sleep, a resting den
get out the the books and records,
the slow time has now begun, when
the stacks of wood are piled in cords.

Yes, slow time has begun, she yawns
and pulls the covers to her chin,
back to sleep until the dawn for
the slow time has now begun, amen.

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  1. Date: 2/12/2014 10:57:00 PM
    We are getting some snowfall right now as I type these words. Your poem describes snow and winter in a fanciful way. Good work as usual Debbie.

  1. Date: 12/28/2013 11:54:00 AM
    Wonderful poem with strong visual quality and personification. Real glad I read it. Which was the poem you wish me to read?

  1. Date: 12/22/2013 6:19:00 AM
    Enjoyed reading your "slow-time" amen. Enjoy the season And a good turn into the new year. Dutch greetings Ellie

  1. Date: 12/20/2013 10:05:00 PM
    well penned Debbie.. best wishes

  1. Date: 12/20/2013 9:06:00 PM
    Beautiful Debbie well done and it is time of year to slumber and walk amongst the evergreen and white wonderland.cheri

  1. Date: 12/19/2013 8:28:00 PM
    :) Lovely... oh, I remember slow time, lol... I think I have about ten years before I experience that again... if for a contest, should top it. If for just you, should sooth you. If just because, will delight all readers. Now, tag.

  1. Date: 12/19/2013 6:08:00 PM
    Lovely write, Debs! I think I should have stayed in hibernation for the snow here is very icy and deep. Nick caught me crying...I NEVER EVER wish to cry in front of my children.:( When I saw his eyes fill up with tears, I felt even worse. Mommies are supposed to be STRONG. He got off the chair he'd pulled up next to me and went into the washroom honking his nose " pulls the covers to her chin, back to sleep until the dawn" sound advise.:) Love, Mikki

  1. Date: 12/19/2013 5:06:00 PM
    Wonderful poem Debbie for your winter months, while we have temperatures in the thirties. I loved the read...peter

  1. Date: 12/19/2013 7:49:00 AM
    A poem which warms up when read in winter! Very nice... Terry (& thanks for your kind comments!)

  1. Date: 12/19/2013 6:04:00 AM
    Ahh!! Very romantic and peaceful but I am sure that the real facts of snow are not so romantic..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

  1. Date: 12/18/2013 4:42:00 PM
    love this, Debs

  1. Date: 12/18/2013 3:40:00 PM
    Nicely written Debbie. We could all use some slow time.

  1. Date: 12/18/2013 8:38:00 AM
    DEBBIE! ABSOLUTELY DELIGHTFUL! Seamless!!!! I love the way you continue your lines and yet keep the rhyme. You are a genius, you! AMEN TO THAT! ;) Love ya...have a good holiday season. Hugs

  1. Date: 12/18/2013 4:13:00 AM
    - Amen ! - Thanks for all the beautiful poems you have shared with me this year, Debbie! - I wish you a beautiful and peaceful Christmas! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 12/18/2013 2:48:00 AM
    Debbie, hello my good friend, yep it is freezing here as well roll on spring, hope you are well, have a very peaceful holiday…David

  1. Date: 12/17/2013 9:36:00 PM
    Yup..yup... Winter feels like it lasts 9 months, and summer 3 ! Thank you for stopping by with the Holiday wishes! :o) May you also have a very Happy Holiday as well.

  1. Date: 12/17/2013 9:04:00 PM
    Oh yes....absolutely..in front of the fire....nice....

  1. Date: 12/17/2013 3:40:00 PM
    oohhhh yes, I love that line about the slow time!! It's so true, but especially when one can rest and enjoy the season in one's own home!! great holiday verse, sweetie.

  1. Date: 12/17/2013 1:30:00 PM
    Time to withdraw to the inner self, explore the depths of our soul, weather collaborates preparing the perfect setting for to ponder upon the heavens! Beautiful and calming poem!

  1. Date: 12/17/2013 12:13:00 PM
    Ah finally a poem that we so need in this hurried Christmas time, I've enjoyed every morsel of it Debbie, bless your beautiful heart, love, peace & joy, my three wishes for you this season, xxx V xxx

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