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Ambiguously Masking Words

. Ambiguously yesss I have without compunction hid wordz from a small sum of soulz cauzing difficulty deciphering their milieu I did hide even the flower'z bursting forth before mine eyne each Spring yes the Spring flower's finding the glow deep within mine globes eager to please mine cerebral's eyne yesss with ease so did i

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James Peranteau

Date: 6/1/2021 7:30:00 PM

I wonder why no one understood this write, it clearly iz there(ain’t it) Much love, James

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/19/2015 8:53:00 AM

You have a way with words! This is cool!

Joe Maverick

Date: 5/21/2014 4:31:00 PM

A slap in the face of winter then James..' I wonder how a winter scorned may react.? L O L hey i could come in for collatrol punishment.' oh well I suppose it will pass, hope things are goi.g wel for you..'

James Peranteau
Date: 6/1/2021 7:13:00 PM

Banter with one who from the deep looking up swells *winks

Farhana Akter

Date: 5/19/2014 11:54:00 PM

Good job james

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/3/2014 3:44:00 PM

Sending you a soup mail, dear!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/3/2014 2:16:00 PM

deeply scribed with languid thoughts so filled with both seasonal flair and scorn.. truly beautiful, james... huggs

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/29/2014 4:27:00 PM

Dearest James, If some "ogling observers" would ruin the flowers petals, it is best to keep them hidden. I see more than one meaning in this extraordinary poem. If you ever care to write, I have the same email address. Love to you and Noah, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/28/2014 6:16:00 PM

I enjoyed your imagery in this poem, James. Gosh, you just suddenly appear out of nowhere. What are you doing to stay so busy these days?