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Amber Quill

From amber quill of daylight’s wane, warmed honey clouds sketch mirrored swells. Bronzed seagulls dipped in twilight’s train; from amber quill of daylight’s wane. In fluttered mass, a golden vein, lifts from the waves in sunset’s spell. From amber quill of daylight’s wane, warmed honey clouds sketch mirrored swells.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/24/2015 8:42:00 AM
Nice Triolet, David. Well done.
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Date: 6/15/2015 9:50:00 AM
Lovely imagery, David! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 6/13/2015 8:38:00 PM
I love the imagery in your poem, David, and your words flow so smooth and dream-like. Congratulations on your win! Sandra
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Date: 6/13/2015 6:32:00 PM
DAVID, Congratulations on your LOVELY SUMMER TRIOLET ----- SKAT :-)
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Date: 6/13/2015 9:18:00 AM
This was one of my favorites...Congrats on a great win David...
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Date: 6/13/2015 5:46:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats David:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/13/2015 1:12:00 AM
DAvid, your imagery is splendid in this triolet. the only thing that turned me off was your use of "wane" as a noun in the repeating line. Congratulations, I think this is so pretty!
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Date: 5/27/2015 6:27:00 AM
Awesome write...7
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Date: 5/25/2015 7:56:00 PM
such a beautiful visual this gives me, enjoyed this one .. *always, S.K.A.T.*
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Date: 5/25/2015 11:47:00 AM
simply stunning! good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx 7 xx
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