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Alone Revised - Contest

I smell the fragrance of your body close to mine the flower of my love now you are alone for one last journey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/29/2013 5:17:00 AM
I think this is wonderful as well, but sad. Keep up thegreat writing, I will catch back up one of these days.
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Date: 6/24/2013 5:54:00 PM
This is a very beautiful poem! Its so good I almost thought I wrote it!!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 6/24/2013 6:19:00 PM
haha dont try and claim it , it got a N/A ...Seren
Date: 6/19/2013 8:07:00 PM
This is a spectacular and tremendous write my friend! I am in complete awe by the splendor of this incredible poem! I really enjoyed reading this delightful piece this evening! What a magnificent poem, Great Work!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 6/24/2013 6:20:00 PM
thx Russell ...Seren
Date: 6/19/2013 4:11:00 PM
Reads like a winner for the contest..Good luck in the contests..Thanks for the consoling words on Gail's blog..Sara
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Seren Roberts
Date: 6/24/2013 6:20:00 PM
No not this time Sara ...Seren

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