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Alone In the City-Constanza

Down the dark alley the winds mutter Tossing the leavings of another day The skies of winter pose as sullen gray No-one hears the words we utter The tired language of our defeats Hope tumbling down the empty streets Atop the hallowed halls banners flutter Announcing the freedom of a slow death The cold smoke from another breath Youthful dreams drift in the city gutter Along with the sparks of human need On rose memories, bitter tears bleed Down the alley the winds mutter No-one hears the words we utter Atop the hallowed hall banners flutter Youthful dreams drift in the city gutter

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/22/2012 9:08:00 AM
I really did like this one's message, Barbara. Soupmail for ya.
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Date: 8/30/2012 4:21:00 PM
Very creative and descriptive work..I enjoyed reading it this eve..Good luck in the contest..Reads like one for the winners' list..Thanks for your visit to my work..Your comment was uplifting..Sara
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Date: 8/30/2012 3:17:00 PM
A sick contrast. Super write, Barb. Love, daver
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Date: 8/30/2012 2:27:00 PM
just beautiful, Barbara - a sure winner here
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Date: 8/30/2012 12:33:00 PM
A winner if you ask me, this marvelous write is. Best wishes for a super win. One love. Joy Wells
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Date: 8/30/2012 11:21:00 AM
so designed to please the senses, barbara... marvelous concept and images!...winning huggs!
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Date: 8/30/2012 9:47:00 AM
Oh boy i've read some brilliant entries in to this contest, and this is up there with the very best. awesome.
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