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Almost Heaven, West Virginia

majestic mountains fog hovering in the morn unsullied waters hasten to the waterfall filling the cold deep basin

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/27/2012 5:54:00 AM
Refreshing and beautiful as your tanka
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Date: 6/25/2012 9:58:00 PM
Love how you ended it with the cold deep basin. You did the song title justice!
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Date: 6/25/2012 5:52:00 PM
Those mountains are truly a gift from heaven Victoria. Peace and blessings to you.
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