All's Fine

Earth spins, black wins. Dusk dies, dew cries. Venus, greets us. And night, dons light. First stars, then Mars. Moonbeams, gild streams. We race, through space. Dawn breaks, life wakes. Sun's ray, brings day. A sign, all's fine. This is a “Footle Poem” written April 3rd , 2015 for the contest (Your Footle Poem).

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 4/7/2015 4:49:00 AM

This is a deep poem, but playful too...I really like it... it mirrors a very observant individual, who seems to show no worry of what life lays before him. Brilliantly penned! Always, Laura

Emile Pinet
Date: 4/7/2015 8:46:00 AM

Thanks so much Laura, I appreciate your visit. Emile.

Jaycee Cervenka

Date: 4/4/2015 3:33:00 PM

I like how even though its a string...its one long poem that reads well. This is one form that makes me crazy to write..not enough syllables allowed. A big thumbs up.-Jan

Emile Pinet
Date: 4/4/2015 3:35:00 PM

Thanks Janet, I appreciate the visit. Emile.

Constance La France

Date: 4/4/2015 12:33:00 AM

Emile, wonderful footles for the contest, best of luck, 7, and thanks for visiting my poetry

Emile Pinet
Date: 4/4/2015 7:05:00 AM

Thanks, I appreciate your support. Emile.

Sandra Haight

Date: 4/3/2015 10:15:00 PM

Very nice, Emile, I love this. The order of our Earth and Galaxy..."all's fine"... and this so well portrayed in your fine Footle. Best wishes for the contest.

Emile Pinet
Date: 4/4/2015 7:05:00 AM

Thanks Sandra, I appreciate your support. Emile.

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 4/3/2015 7:48:00 PM

G'day Emile... I was not familiar with footles, but those I have read tell great yarns with so few words, and your footle is as good as I have read. Thank you Emile - Lindsay

Emile Pinet
Date: 4/4/2015 7:07:00 AM

Thanks Lindsay, I appreciate your support. Emile.

Tonytocaa Camacho

Date: 4/3/2015 6:37:00 PM

Emile,love the easy flow of this verse,enjoyed thanks tonytocaa

Emile Pinet
Date: 4/4/2015 7:07:00 AM

Thanks, I appreciate your support. Emile.

Jan Allison

Date: 4/3/2015 5:50:00 PM

I do love this short form - a great string of footles - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Emile Pinet
Date: 4/3/2015 6:27:00 PM

Thanks Jan, I appreciate it. Emile.