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A Spark In Flight

My love, the world is ours, its reflective sapphire oceans, its turquoise pine tree forests, its topaz colored days, its moonstone lit evenings. My love, I'm certain it's us. The amethyst citrine painted sunset  called our names right from its onset. You are my never ending wide open sky with a red orange coral moon up high. So radiant is your glow, a sparkle in flight how you shine - a spectrum of colors like light  through a crystal clear white garnet. Your hair like flowing strands of  pearls, crests lightly to sit brightly on your opal shaded breasts with their dark red inviting rubies set. Your emerald green stare gentle with its powers like diamond brilliant rays during sun showers. Your divine allure so true and pure oft blinds me and when I see I see only you like the jade dew covers the morning lawn on a sardonyx dawn. You are the gem drives my joyous life, the precious stone keeps my dreams alive. You are indeed a jewel rare, "who" I ask "could compare?" 11~15~2014 Maurice Yvonne Sponsor: Carol Eastman Contest Name: Your Favorite Poem Contest

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Date: 3/19/2015 11:45:00 PM
Beautiful poetry Maurice! Congrats on big win! Trust you are keeping well these days!
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Date: 3/19/2015 4:02:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Armand this truly is a gem of a poem:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/19/2015 12:24:00 PM
HI MAURICE, Congratulations on your awesome win..... Luv ~LINDA~
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Date: 12/10/2014 4:17:00 AM
Well worded with adjectival superlatives. Women come in many hues. Though beauty is in the eyes of the beholder, it is the desire and disposition of the beholder that allows the perception of the presentation. Every Woman is a Gem and That is the Strenght of a Woman. Nice One M.Y.
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Date: 12/9/2014 2:19:00 PM
Oh! Wow! You are on top of my list, when you make a precious woman sound like a rare gem. Some men rank that same position Blessing to you my friend eve 7
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Date: 11/20/2014 12:41:00 PM
I am impressed, Maurice!! You sure know your stones and gems! You are a jeweller of rich tastes who has a sparkly eye for females. Well done....a#7 for you. // paul
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Date: 11/17/2014 5:22:00 PM
so cleverly done Maurice from these words you create something divine hugs 7+fav
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Date: 11/17/2014 3:57:00 PM
ooh la la!! YOu used the names of so many gems to convey such a sweet romantic message. this is wonderful, Maurice! I bet Anthony will like it. I can't figure him out but I think you have that little something he really digs!! A SEVEN!! and a fave
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Date: 11/17/2014 2:56:00 PM
Very very flattering! How cool! Good luck in the contest! Thanks for stopping by my verses. Light & Love
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Date: 11/17/2014 7:07:00 AM
Maurice thanks for this beautiful poem. wonderfully composed
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Date: 11/16/2014 7:38:00 PM
Comparing your woman to all these precious gemstones is special for sure and a lovely compliment for her. A romantic write to light up any woman's face with a smile! This is a great entry Maurice! #7
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Date: 11/16/2014 5:31:00 PM
Maurice this is a jewel in its own right, I love how you wrap your words around with out of the world phrases... definitely a fav.....Seren
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Date: 11/16/2014 4:26:00 PM
What a beautiful, romantic poem, dear Maurice! I hope the "gem" in your life has seen this poem. Few men can top the romantic writing skills you display here. Love the imagery and all of the gems you worked so cleverly into this poem. Best wishes in the contest! Love, carolyn
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Date: 11/15/2014 10:47:00 PM
Wow, beautiful poem Maurice, very creative, now I must agree with you, all women are gems, the problem is too many men are Jewelers!!! :)
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Date: 11/15/2014 8:27:00 PM
Maurice, A most exceptional write here indeed!! I really enjoyed the words here very much. A definite "7" and a "FAV." Best of Luck in this contest!! Best Always, Gary
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Date: 11/15/2014 7:03:00 PM
I wish I were a jeweler - this is a gem worthy of close inspection . . . your prose is outstanding my friend. All the best.
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Date: 11/15/2014 5:28:00 PM
Well done...like how you did this
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Date: 11/15/2014 5:24:00 PM
WOW Maurice and absolute GEM of a poem - its a 7 and faves :-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/15/2014 5:16:00 PM
A masterpiece!! T o my favs !! Charma
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